Summary of Treatment Changes

After gathering feedback from an audience, there are no major changes that we need too make too our treatment. As reading i noticed a few grammar mistakes which we will change.

The only thing we will be changing to the idea is the name of our film, as it is suggested that "on the edge for love" is too obvious, and it gives away a lot of our film, so we have decided too change too "on the edge of love" As it gives away less of the plot too our film.