On the edge of love rough cut

This is the Rough cut of our film "On the edge of love". I am very happy with this product, as i feel we have worked very effectively as a production group and a cast to produce this, and we have done very well at overcoming the difficulties we faced in the construction of our film.

I am very happy with some parts of the film, Mainly the fight scene of our film, as this went very well and it was one of the most difficult parts to film as it contained a lot of shots and it was a challenge to ensure there was no continuity errors when shooting this scene.

There is nothing i am majorly unhappy with, but there are a lot of shots that could be done a lot better we just did not have the time in this first cut, the green screen is poorly edited and there is a major continuity error that we need to fix, and there is a shot in the cafe scene that is out of focus. However we can fix this, and despite these i am very happy with how this short has turned out. Of course we will gather some peer feedback next so we can gain an outside view and see if they can suggest any changes to our film.