Evaluation of Peer Feedback

Each and every bit of feedback from our class is helpful to us and we are very greatful for it, after reading through the feedback we have come up with a list of changes that we plan to make, and we are going to try and make as many of these changes as possible within the time allocated to us for Re-films and Re-edits.

• We are going to change the Livetype settings of the Ident and titles, and probably change the titles themselves to something a bit more advanced.
• We are going to make the "starring" text at the beginning of our film bolder so it is easier to read.
• We Will try to reshoot the kiss/slap from a seperate angle. 
• We Will cut the shots at the train station earlier to keep the pace of our film moving quickly.
• We will edit out the colour change mentioned at 2.26 as this is a major flaw and looks very odd. 
• We are going to make the shutter sound effect a lot less prominent as it is to loud and noticeable.
• We will try to film the cafe scene again in focus, as it is slightly out of focus in one of the shots as this is very difficult to notice on the camera preview screen.
• We will replace the shot at the start of the fight scene with something a little more self explanitory.
• We are going to Re-film/Re-edit the green screen as there is a continuity error and it just doesnt look good in general. 
• We Will try to make the cross-fades of Joe walking up the ramp more symmetrical. 
• We are going to re-film the shot of Joe jumping onto the tracks to make this look more realistic.
• We will improve the credits and make them a bit longer.